Part Five

I don't really have much of an opinion on this section. The story is losing it's shine for me and although it may not be dry, it's not as intriguing as I would hope. The graveyard concept is quaint. Refugees are a cheap way to extract emotion in a story though. The development between the 'forbidden love' between Connor and Rita (my Winston and Julia) makes me wonder if she'll do something in the next section since they're incarcerated now to betray him. (If either gives their life/they did together/something remotely Rome-Juliet-esque happens I will be disappointed)